The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
The graph illustrates the amount of
foriegn
travellers who have visited Correct your spelling
foreign
in
one of the European countries and the data was taken in the period of 1987 to 2007. Change preposition
apply
According to
the data, there were numorous
of visitors have come to three main areas of the selected country and there Correct your spelling
numerous
were
Change the verb form
was
significant
enhancement of people who visited in 2007 Correct article usage
a significant
than
Change preposition
at
Correct article usage
the begining
begining
of the study.
Correct your spelling
beginning
In contrast
, 10 thousands
of foreigners had been visiting the lakes in 1987 Fix the agreement mistake
thousand
whislt
the others Correct your spelling
whilst
preffered
to visit Correct your spelling
preferred
mountains
and coast in that year, Correct article usage
the mountains
However
, there was a significant increase of
lake visitors up to its peak level and Change preposition
in
that is
almost 75 thousands
when Change to singular
thousand
reach
2002 Change the verb form
reaching
although
it has reduced by 25 thousands
in 2007.
Change to singular
thousand
In addition
, community
of Add an article
a community
the community
mountains
visiting has Fix the agreement mistake
mountain
a
increased slightly from 20 Correct article usage
apply
thousands
to 35 Change to singular
thousand
thousands
Change to singular
thousand
whislt
coast visitors Correct your spelling
while
had
increased rapidly when 2002 Unnecessary verb
apply
although
it has some fluctuations.Submitted by shanikanir86 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words thousands with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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