The advantage and
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of hosting an international
sports
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. Some individuals believe it is wasting money. Some feel it is the opposite. In my opinion, the merits of hosting
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sports
event
host
outweigh the demerits because hosting an international
sports
event
can
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the local
economy
of
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country
, and improve the
tourism
industry
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the
host
country
.
To
with, there are several benefits of hosting international
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. The primary benefit is hosting international
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can enhance the
economy
of
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country
. To illustrate, more
people
worldwide will
visit
the
host
country
in order to attend the international
sports
event
.
For example
, million
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from worldwide visited Qatar in order to attend
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Cup
event
for football .
Therefore
, more
people
will
visit
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international
sports
event
mean more
people
will spend money on
, flights, and public transport, which means more money will contribute to
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of
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.
Furthermore
, hosting an international
sports
event
will create more jobs opportunity and income for local
people
.
For instance
,
people
will work in
, playgrounds , and
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sales.
Consequently
, hosting an international
sports
event
can improve the living standards of
people
, which contribute to
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the rate of crime and poverty.
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tourismCorrect article usage
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industry
is another advantage of hosting an international
sports
event
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.
This
is because some
people
who
visit
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country
maybe admire
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this
country
and
visit
this
country
again in future as tourists.
As a result
, international
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will enhance
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industry
in
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country
.
To sum up
, from my perspective, the upsides of hosting
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significantly more far than
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downsides
due to
hosting an international
sports
event
can have
a positive impactsCorrect the article-noun agreement
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on the local
economy
of
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and boosts
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industry
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the
host
country
.