You are going to study in a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college. In your letter explain your accommodation requirements explain what your food needs are ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want

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Dear Joyce, How are you? I am still immersed in the exciting atmosphere from
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weekend.
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, I'd like to ask you to do me a favour. Because I left my coat in your
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. I vividly remember the
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time I wore it was Sunday afternoon we went out shopping in a convenience store nearby. When we back to your
home
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, I put it off and raise it up in the closet in the guest room. When I came back to my
home
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, it isn't in the bag, I apologise to my stupid.
This
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is a black coat with two main pockets. I actually can take it next weekend , but I found there are some necessary items in my pocket for
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week. One of each is my ID card and the other one is my office key,both of which I need to use
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week. Please help me to check the closet I live in in your
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. I'm wondering whether or not you have available time to meet up with me tomorrow morning. I 'm looking forward to your call back. Best wishes, Tina.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Hall of Residence
  • accommodation requirements
  • proximity
  • en-suite facilities
  • special accommodations
  • dietary restrictions
  • meal plans
  • kitchen facilities
  • campus canteens
  • securing accommodations
  • alternative housing options
  • private rentals
  • off-campus housing
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