Music play an important role in society, other think it is simply a form of entertainment for individuals. Discuss both view and give your opponion?

The influence of

music

on

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life has been a topic of concern in

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society. There are those who argued that

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music

has a profound

imapct

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impact

on society as a whole,

others

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while others

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believe that

this

is only a genre of

activitiy

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activity

activities

specifically catering

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to entertaining

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entertaining

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purposes to individuals.

This

essay will delve into both sides of the statement and

then

show my own perspectives. Of course, it goes without saying that

effectiveness

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of

music

when it

come

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to

offer

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a sense of

joys

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and

satisfactory

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for audiences. Many consider listening to

music

as a way to

entertaint

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entertain

their leisure time

such

as

visting

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visiting

theaters

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or concerts, enjoying the vibrant environment or relieving stress after a long hour of study or work.

Moreover

, it would take a significant time to learn how to play new instruments, by

praticing

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practising

greatly;

thus

, they have less time to engage in

unheathy

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unhealthy

activities

such

smoking

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or surfing social media. Beyond the positive sides to individuals,

music

could offer more than that to whole

comunities

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communities

itself. By

promoing

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promoting

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the traditional values through ancient songs, which once

being

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spreaded

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would preserve the local characteristics and enhance

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the indentity

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indentity

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identity

of

comunities

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communities

. In Vietnam,

for instance

, “Ho Hue” – a local type of royal

music

has become

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iconic

atractions

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attraction

as regarding visiting Hue city.

Besides

,

music

is an effective vehicle to advertise the images of

a countries

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countries

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.

In particular

, with

popularity

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the popularity

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of pop type, La Lisa,

for instance

, who is a

woldwide

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worldwide

pop

stars

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from Thailand

suceeded

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succeeded

in taking

advatages

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advantage

advantages

of her fame to

promoting

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her motherland’s images to the

wold

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world

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.

To conclude

, it is

inportant

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important

to say that

music

not only

enable

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an

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particular individual to have fun but

also

allow

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allows

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them or

a

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organization to make a contribution towards developing the images of their communities.