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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this notion.

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In
this
 era, many genres of
music
 are developing more vast and growing throughout the branches of the world.
Furthermore
, several
people
 believe that
music
 is one of the actions that can bring a lot of connection between different cultures and age groups. I strongly agree with
this
 statement as
a great deal of
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 groups in the world
are
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 being united by their taste in
music
. In
this
 essay, I will talk about my point of view on why
music
 can unify society. To start with, listening to
music
 that has unfamiliar features can be hard for
people
. They cannot appreciate what is the meaning behind the piece and some
people
 might get frustrated, leading to a bad attitude towards the enjoyers of that genre.
For example
, there are a lot of fan wars on social media that occur between two or more fandoms, defending their favourites from each other.
However
, since
music
 is used to express the artist's emotions and passion,
people
 can feel it just by listening to it.
Music
 has different types of melody segments that can communicate different feelings and humans have the ability to recognize it.
For instance
, individuals can understand whether a song has sad or happy vibes without paying attention to the lyrics, especially in classical pieces.
This
 is the main reason why
music
 can bring togetherness despite differences in cultures and ages,
due to
 human's tendencies to bond with those who are in common. In conclusion, communicating through
music
 is not always unchallenging, as few
people
 are having a negative view of it. Still, I strongly believe that the positive aspects of
music
 outweigh the flaw and
music
 is a way of communicating with different parts of the world via emotional state,
thus
 creating a common interest for those who do not share the same language, culture, generation, and beliefs.
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