The charts show the Australian school leavers did immediately after leaving secondary school.

The charts show the Australian school leavers did immediately after leaving secondary school.
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The pie charts illustrate the
percentage
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of future plans of
students
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in Australia who graduated from secondary school from 1980 to 2000.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the future of education was the dominant choice in 1980, but employment took the place of it in both 1990 and 2000.
Moreover
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, the proportion of tertiary education saw a decreasing pattern
while
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those for employment experienced an increasing pattern. Looking at the chart more closely, one can see that in 1980, the majority of graduates in Australia chose to study
further
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, accounting for half of the total
percentage
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, followed by 40% of
students
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who decided to be employed. The rate of unemployed people was the least at just one-fifth of for proportion of
students
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who opt to study more.
However
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, in 1990, the
percentage
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of decided to be employed in a company increased by 10%, becoming the most popular choice. Meanwhile, the rate of those who selected
further
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education fell moderately to 38%.
Although
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the proportion of unemployed people rose by 2%, it still remained the least popular one. In the final year of the period, the rate of employed
students
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was equal to the
percentage
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of employed and unemployed people combined, at 55 per cent.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • tertiary education
  • vocational training institutions
  • competitive job market
  • skilled professionals
  • workforce
  • practical work experience
  • employment opportunities
  • gap year
  • volunteer work
  • personal development
  • formal education
  • online courses
  • part-time studies
  • continuous learning
  • unemployment
  • career guidance
  • support services
  • informed decisions
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