The charts show the Australian school leavers did immediately after leaving secondary school.

The charts show the Australian school leavers did immediately after leaving secondary school.
The pie charts illustrate the
percentage
of future plans of
students
in Australia who graduated from secondary school from 1980 to 2000.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the future of education was the dominant choice in 1980, but employment took the place of it in both 1990 and 2000.
Moreover
, the proportion of tertiary education saw a decreasing pattern
while
those for employment experienced an increasing pattern. Looking at the chart more closely, one can see that in 1980, the majority of graduates in Australia chose to study
further
, accounting for half of the total
percentage
, followed by 40% of
students
who decided to be employed. The rate of unemployed people was the least at just one-fifth of for proportion of
students
who opt to study more.
However
, in 1990, the
percentage
of decided to be employed in a company increased by 10%, becoming the most popular choice. Meanwhile, the rate of those who selected
further
education fell moderately to 38%.
Although
the proportion of unemployed people rose by 2%, it still remained the least popular one. In the final year of the period, the rate of employed
students
was equal to the
percentage
of employed and unemployed people combined, at 55 per cent.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • tertiary education
  • vocational training institutions
  • competitive job market
  • skilled professionals
  • workforce
  • practical work experience
  • employment opportunities
  • gap year
  • volunteer work
  • personal development
  • formal education
  • online courses
  • part-time studies
  • continuous learning
  • unemployment
  • career guidance
  • support services
  • informed decisions
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