The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table stated the difference in the total amount of
visitors
to Ashdown
Museum
before and after the refurbishment,
while
another pie chats compared the satisfaction of the
museum
's
visitors
in the same period.
Overall
, more
people
visited Ashdown
Museum
after the construction. It is
also
noticeable that a larger proportion of
visitors
felt satisfied after
museum
reconstructions, which meant the
museum
had attracted more
people
to come to
visitors
and the satisfaction rate rose after it is refurbished. The first table showed a rise of 18,000
visitors
to the
museum
after the redevelopment, which increased from 74,000 to 92,000
people
. In the second graph, there were 75% of
people
felt satisfied after the reconstruction, which is nearly two times of percentage points compared to the satisfaction of the visitor before the new development.
In contrast
, a much smaller percentage of
visitors
who are dissatisfied with the
museum
, which there was a reduction of 20 percentage points, from the half of
visitors
who showed dissatisfaction before the construction to 20% of them after the development. Meanwhile, the category of no response remains unchanged during the period, which is at 5%.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • refurbishment
  • visitor numbers
  • satisfaction levels
  • very satisfied
  • satisfied
  • neither satisfied nor dissatisfied
  • dissatisfied
  • very dissatisfied
  • survey results
  • comparison
  • impact
  • effectiveness
  • visitor experience
  • overall improvement
  • increase/decrease in visitors
  • positive feedback
  • negative feedback
  • visitor survey
  • survey period
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