The two bar charts give information about the proportion of obesity in boys and girs between the ages of 12 and 19 by nationality in the United States for the two decades (2010 and 2014)

The two bar charts give information about the

proportion

of obesity in

boys

and

girs

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girls

between the ages of 12 and 19 by nationality in the United States for

the

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two decades (2010 and 2014). A glance at the graph reveals that the percentage of obese

girls

and

boys

increased by 2014,

in

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hispanic

boys

and

non-hispanic

girls

were at

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risk. Among

boys

, the

proportion

of obesity was similar for

Non-Hispanic

White,

Non-Hispanic

Black and

Hispanic

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at 12%, 11% and 13% respectively in the first decade. In 2014, these rates increased to 17%, 20% and 27% for the same nationalities. In

girls

, the

proportion

of obesity was almost similar to

boys

for

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Non-Hispanic

White and

Hispanic

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Hispanics

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at 9% and 12% respectively in 2004. It is obvious there was the highest share (16%) for

Non-Hispanic

Black

girls

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this

year. The two mentioned above data of ethnicity rise by 5%,

while

the

proportion

of Black

girls

climbed to 29% in the second decade.