The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, traffic has become a major problem, especially for the for working or shopping there would not be face-to-face interaction between
people
who are living in the cities, and many have an opinion that this
can be reduced if people
stop travelling to their workplaces, education centres and shopping areas. I completely disagree with this
viewpoint because shutting down those activities is not addressing the problem.
To begin
with, some types of jobs are essential to support people
to fulfil their necessity like doctors, polices, lawyers, and daily wage workers and it also
can not be done without physically serving people
who need their skills. For example
, a serious disease which needs further
treatment should directly go to a hospital and receive medical treatment from a doctor. Furthermore
, if more people
stay at home and less in travelCorrect quantifier usage
less
people
, so they became less interactive and unsocialized people
. As an illustration, during covid-19 outbreak people
must conduct isolation in their homes, although
it makes less congestion, this
led to people
feeling stressed and less communication.
In addition
to the aforementioned reason, shutting down people
moving obviously reduces the traffic bottleneck. However
, it creates a negative impact on another field, economic business for example
. When people
stop moving from one place to another place will lead to the downfall of many automobile companies and people
will become jobless. Moreover
, one country which obtained a benefit from this
kind of industry will affect their income where it is paramount to support government programs. Consequently
, the city will experience an economic downturn.
In conclusion, stopping travelling is not a feasible solution because it will affect many jobs and the economy of the state. Therefore
, I remain
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