The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, traffic has become a major problem, especially for the for working or shopping there would not be face-to-face interaction between
people
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people
stop travelling to their workplaces, education centres and shopping areas. I completely disagree with Use synonyms
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viewpoint because shutting down those activities is not addressing the problem.
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people
who need their skills. Use synonyms
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treatment should directly go to a hospital and receive medical treatment from a doctor. Linking Words
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people
moving obviously reduces the traffic bottleneck. Use synonyms
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, it creates a negative impact on another field, economic business Linking Words
for example
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people
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people
will become jobless. Use synonyms
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, one country which obtained a benefit from Linking Words
this
kind of industry will affect their income where it is paramount to support government programs. Linking Words
Consequently
, the city will experience an economic downturn.
In conclusion, stopping travelling is not a feasible solution because it will affect many jobs and the economy of the state. Linking Words
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