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The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon
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The given diagrams demonstrate the average life span of
Salmon
 fish.
Overall
, the life cycle of
salmon
 consists of 3 stages, beginning with
salmon
 eggs which are situated in
upper
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the upper
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river
, and ending with adult
salmon
 in
open
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the open
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 sea. In the first phase, eggs are situated under reeds and small stones in
upper
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the upper
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river
 and it takes about
5-6months
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5-6 months
 to grow into fry with an approximate length of 2-8cm.
Subsequently
, the second stage continues with
fry
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the fry
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 staying in
lower
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the lower
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river
 (fast flowing) for about 4 years to transform into
smolt
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a smolt
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 which is about 12-15 in terms of length. In the third step, smolt swims to open sea and ocean to spend a period of about 5 years to reach the final phase of ovulation and cultivate
to
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 adult large fish which
longs
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 about 70-76 cm and
considered
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are considered
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as
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apply
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a large species among these types of marine creatures. The adult
salmon
 continues
this
 repeating cultivation cycle by swimming to the upper
river
 to situate new eggs.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, river with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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