the chart below shows the number of houesholds in the us by thier annual income in 2007 , 2011 and 2015

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The bar chart illustrates the rate of households in the USA by their annual profit in 2017, 2011, and 2015.

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,as we can see from the bar chart twenty million households from 2007 to 2015

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approximately the same between 50,000-74,999, but in 2015 there was a significantly increased of over 100,000 or more. in 2007 the data shows fluctuation and gradually decreased from above 25% to 15% but there was a sharp rise of 100,000 or more in annual income, the rate of households approxmily 29%.

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the chart below shows the number of houesholds in the us by thier annual income in 2007 , 2011 and 2015

Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Television as powerful educational tool or mindless entertainment ? What extent do you agree or disagree ?

Some people say advertising has positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because it will make people dissatisfied with who they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.