the chart below shows the number of houesholds in the us by thier annual income in 2007 , 2011 and 2015

the chart below shows the number of houesholds in the us by thier annual income in 2007 , 2011 and 2015
The bar chart illustrates the rate of households in the USA by their annual profit in 2017, 2011, and 2015.
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,as we can see from the bar chart twenty million households from 2007 to 2015
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approximately the same between 50,000-74,999, but in 2015 there was a significantly increased of over 100,000 or more. in 2007 the data shows fluctuation and gradually decreased from above 25% to 15% but there was a sharp rise of 100,000 or more in annual income, the rate of households approxmily 29%.
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