Some people believe they should keep all the money they earn instead of paying tax to the state, to which extent do you agree or disagree?
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their own
money
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not paying tax
is certainly a contentious one. Whilst there are valid arguments to the contrary. I personally believe that citizens should be paid to the country, especially Fix the agreement mistake
taxes
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can help the government unify management. In this
essay, both views along with
my opinion will be further
elaborated.
On one hand, many people
discern that those incomes should not be taxed to
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means they can free
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are also
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Therefore
, they have able to hold all the money
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money
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to have
money
to buy a house. Thus
, the public want
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government
.
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the government
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the previously-mentioned
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people
ideas, I emphasize that states need to folks collect taxes. Change noun form
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can promote government management together, and reduce gap
between rich and poor. At the same time, the administration can Add an article
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use these funds for city construction. In other words
, folks should become a taxpayer. Because of
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money
paid by wealthy and poor people
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the same.
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is
after
this
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money
for nation building
and economic inequality. Add a hyphen
nation-building
Therefore
, I once again reaffirm my position that folks should be
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tax
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taxes
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