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Band 1

write a report for a university lecturer describing the process shown

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The chart illustrates the process of a college speaker about the
produce
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producing
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 skill and the message response.
At the first stage
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, it can be noticed that the storage included original information and produced components, which are vital.
Thereafter
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, storage, product
explore
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exploration
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 and design are sent to the produce thinking, where it is mixed and turned into the collection. At that time, the message about
this
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 planning
through
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thought
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 has returned to
store
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the store
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.
Next,
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assembly
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the assembly
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 is sent to the inspection, before being mixed and turned into the examination.
At
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In
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 the second stage, feedback of testing information back to the design, and
also
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 examination is sent to the placed in the packaging
,
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apply
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 until it is added market survey which among about advertising, and tuned into the despatch.
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, the dispatch is sent to sales and
then
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 to the project through
the
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apply
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market research.
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, production planning forms a circle.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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