The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts compare the proportion of spending on different goods and
services
in two countries in 2010.
Overall
, It can be seen that people in both countries spent the largest part of their incomes on Housing and Food services
, while
Health Care received the lowest share of expenditure
.
House services
were the highest expenditure
in Malaysia, accounted
for 34 %, Wrong verb form
accounting
while
Japanese households allocated just 21% of their budget to this
category. In terms of Food, the percentage of expenditure
in Japan and Malaysia was similar at 24% and 27%, respectively.
Regarding remaining
categories, Japanese households spent a fifth of the total spending on Transport Correct article usage
the remaining
services
, twice as much as the figure for Malaysia. Health care
Correct your spelling
Healthcare
services
received the lowest proportion of average household expenditure
in two
countries, Correct article usage
the two
while
Other goods and services
were quite significant, at over a quarter in each country.Submitted by boocheapofficial on
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