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Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In
this
 cutting-edge era,
children
 who are born and brought up in those
families
 who have less money are better at facing the difficulties of
adult
life
 as compared to those little ones who are brought up in wealthy
families
. I totally agree with
this
 notion, but I
also
 believe that some
children
 who are born into wealthy
families
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are very smart at solving
problems
. To embark with, there are numerous young ones who are very intelligent in solving
problems
 of
adult
life
 it doesn't matter for them they never
face
 any difficulty in their
life
 before. Whenever anyone faces
problem
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 in their
life
 at that time they should have their mind refreshed so they can think
in
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 an effective way for solving the problem.
Thus
,Better thinking matters more in facing any difficulty.
However
,
children
 who already
face
 a plethora of hurdles in their
life
 they get
experience
 from them and they can
also
 solve issues in an easy way in their
adult
life
. By gaining
experience
 one could get perfection in that work. Without ,
experience
 no one can do any task properly. In Vietnam,
for instance
, 78% of
children
 who belongs to
poor
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 family and they faced numerous
problems
 in their
life
 and in
adult
life
 they do better and solve
problems
 in just a few minutes as they have
experience
.
Moreover
, mental ability is
also
 changed
according to
 situations they
face
 in their daily routine which
also
 affects their thinking better to make their
life
 better by getting rid of hurdles. In conclusion,
although
 intelligent
children
 can think better and solve
problems
 in a smart, I believe that those youngsters who are from poor
families
 are better at facing difficulties as they already
face
 difficulties since childhood.
Submitted by MANJOT on

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