The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.

The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.
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The graph illustrates how many journeys were completed by students between the age between 5 and 12 in the years 1990 and 2010. The
way
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itself consisted of the path to school and back home using various transition systems. It can be seen that
while
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travelling in the
car
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had increased everything else has fallen. By comparing the walking and
car
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travelling it can be seen that the first dropper all of the sudden in 2 times,
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the
car
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travel raised in just about 2.5 times.
Car
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passengers started in 1990 as the most unfavourable
way
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of travelling
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walking was the most common one. In 2010 things had become almost exactly the opposite. Everything else
also
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showed a fall in numbers in
this
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time period
such
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as cycling dropped from six
millions
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to two million and became the most unusual
way
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of getting from home to school.
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others
also
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showed a decrease but not as much, walking and coach declined just about 50% and the bus dropped just for a quarter. In conclusion, all of the
way
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of getting around declined in those 20 years apart of the vehicle transport showing steady rapid growth.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words way, car with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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