The table gives information about Underground Railroad networks in six big cities regarding when they were opened, the size and the number of users annually

The table gives information about Underground Railroad networks in six big cities regarding when they were opened, the size and the number of users annually
The table presents information on the opening date,
route's
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kilometers
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and the number of
passengers
per
year
in
millions
for Underground
Railroad
networks in six major
cities
.
Overall
, among all 6
cities
,
London
was the first
Railroad
to open whilst Los Angeles was the
last
. In terms of
kilometers
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of
route
,
London
has been the city with the longest
rail
distance
whereas
Kyoto
's railway spread the least distance. Tokyo has been the most overcrowded city for underground railway
passengers
annually, and
by contrast
,
Kyoto
was used by the least number of
passengers
in a single
year
. Among the oldest networks,
London
and
Paris
railroads dated back to 1863 and 1900, respectively. Having the most distances for their
rail
system
(394
Kilometers
in
London
, and 199
Kilometers
in
Paris
), these
cities
contribute to roughly 2000
millions
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passengers
per
year
(
London
with 775 million
passengers
in comparison with
Paris
's 1191
millions
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commuters). 27 years after the establishment of
Paris
rail
, Tokyo was set up as the third longest
railroad
system
with 155
kilometers
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designated to their network. In comparison to all the six major
cities
presented here, Tokyo was the most overpopulated
railroad
system
, transporting 1927
millions
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passengers
over a
year
. More current systems include Washington D.C, which opened its
system
in 1976,
Kyoto
in 1981, and Los Angeles (in 2001). In Washington D.C, 126
kilometers
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of
railroad
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has had the responsibility for transportation of 144 million individuals
while
Los Angeles's 50 million
passengers
reach their destinations via a 28
kilometers
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railroad
system
. Meanwhile,
Kyoto
's 11
kilometers
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railroad
route
, which was the shortest
rail
route
among the 6 major
cities
, had the responsibility to move only 45
millions
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city dwellers, making it the
system
with the least number of
passengers
between the major
cities
.
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