The table shows data about underground railway system in six major cities with data opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in million
The table illustrates figures
of
Change preposition
for
underground
Add an article
the underground
railway
with Fix the agreement mistake
railways
date
opened, Correct article usage
the date
kilometres
of route
and Add an article
the route
number
of passenger
per Change to a plural noun
passengers
year
in six different cities.
Overall
, it can be seen that among six
cities, Correct article usage
the six
railway
station in Tokyo was the most popular Correct article usage
the railway
while
the only a
smallest Correct article usage
apply
number
of passengers
per year
was recorded in
Kyoto Change preposition
for
Railway
.
In terms of Date
opened. London station launched the earliest among all Correct article usage
the Date
while
the newest railway
was in Los Angeles which just opened in 2001. Other cities both shown
Wrong verb form
show
the
similar date of Correct article usage
a
open
in the 19th . Replace the word
opening
London
Change noun form
London's
underground
system led the top Capitalize word
Underground
kilometres
of route
by 394 km. Add an article
the route
a route
Meanwhile
Paris, Tokyo and Washington DC Add a comma
,Meanwhile
kilometres
has
gone ranged Change the verb form
have
around
120 to 200 km. Change preposition
from around
However
, the least number
of kilometres
of railway
received by Kyoto city and Los Angeles, by 11% and 28% respectively.
Regarding the number
of passengers
per year
, Kyoto and Los Angeles station was
Change the verb form
were
also
the least popular compared to other
when registered only 45 Correct pronoun usage
others
millions
and 50 Change to singular
million
millions
Change to singular
million
passengers
per year
, respectively. In contrast
, big number
of people preferred railway
in Paris (1191 Correct article usage
the railway
millions
Change to singular
million
passengers
) and Tokyo (1928 millions
Change to singular
million
passengers
).Submitted by boocheapofficial on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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