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Nuclear

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would be notoriously the only source for humankind to survive on because

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use of fossil

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have

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proven to crumple our future dreams by our fellow scientists.

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could generate vast

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of

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believe that we should consider different forms of

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to gain what is there more than

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solely hooked up

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these indigenous fossil

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.

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with, it is undeniable that nuclear

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is relatively harmless to the environment since the byproduct released by nuclear

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plants

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is only steam which is completely green.

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, burning of fossil

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would primarily produce sulfur dioxide

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sulfur impurities in it ;

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, causing the rain to be acidic.

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, nuclear

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provide abundant

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of

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as opposed to other alternatives,

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the concept of Physics, radioactive materials are long-lasting ; especially uranium-235 as it has the longest half-life. To summarise, it is indisputable that nuclear sources are the current form of

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that we can rely on for many years to come. Despite all the benefits that are deemed beneficial of nuclear

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, its

power

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plants

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are expensive and tedious to maintain. A construction site for

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nuclear power plants

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power

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plants

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require

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clear lands which could be quite

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expense. Once built, the

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plant requires extreme safety measures which is an additional

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. These safety measures are taken to prevent nuclear radiation which could have detrimental effects

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the environment.

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is supported by the

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that nuclear

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have

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high penetrating

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which can destroy living organism cells and leave radioactive after-effects which

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mutations in organisms.

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, the Chernobyl accident had

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many casualties when a nuclear

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plant failed to operate safely.

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, even with

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there are still many drawbacks to nuclear

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. In a nutshell, it is prominent that nuclear

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plays a part in our lives as it

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to be the

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latest and yet the best form of renewable

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.

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having some minor issues, it is convincing enough to quote that nuclear

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is our safety blanket for the sake of our future.