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Nuclear
energy
would be notoriously the only source for humankind to survive on because prolong
use of fossil Wrong verb form
prolonged
fuels
have
proven to crumple our future dreams by our fellow scientists. Correct subject-verb agreement
has
While
I strongly agree that fossil fuels
could generate vast amount
of Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
energy
, I also
believe that we should consider different forms of energy
to gain what is there more than to
solely hooked up Change preposition
apply
on
these indigenous fossil Change preposition
to
fuels
.
To begin
with, it is undeniable that nuclear energy
is relatively harmless to the environment since the byproduct released by nuclear power
plants
is only steam which is completely green. On the contrary
, burning of fossil fuels
would primarily produce sulfur dioxide due to
sulfur impurities in it ; consequently
, causing the rain to be acidic. Additionally
, nuclear plants
provide abundant amount
of Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
energy
as opposed to other alternatives, according to
the concept of Physics, radioactive materials are long-lasting ; especially uranium-235 as it has the longest half-life. To summarise, it is indisputable that nuclear sources are the current form of energy
that we can rely on for many years to come.
Despite all the benefits that are deemed beneficial of nuclear energy
, its power
plants
are expensive and tedious to maintain. A construction site for a nuclear
Correct the article-noun agreement
nuclear power plants
a nuclear power plant
power
plants
require
clear lands which could be quite Change the verb form
requires
hefty
expense. Once built, the Correct article usage
a hefty
power
plant requires extreme safety measures which is an additional costs
. These safety measures are taken to prevent nuclear radiation which could have detrimental effects Change the noun form
cost
to
the environment. Change preposition
on
This
is supported by the facts
that nuclear Fix the agreement mistake
fact
energy
have
high penetrating Change the verb form
has
power
which can destroy living organism cells and leave radioactive after-effects which causes
mutations in organisms. Change the verb form
cause
For example
, the Chernobyl accident had causes
many casualties when a nuclear Wrong verb form
caused
power
plant failed to operate safely. Thus
, even with advantages
there are still many drawbacks to nuclear Add a comma
,advantages
energy
.
In a nutshell, it is prominent that nuclear energy
plays a part in our lives as it conditioned
to be the Add a missing verb
is conditioned
the
latest and yet the best form of renewable Remove the redundancy
apply
energy
. Although
having some minor issues, it is convincing enough to quote that nuclear energy
is our safety blanket for the sake of our future.Submitted by eimanasrinooh
on
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