Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school. What are the reasons? What could be done to solve this problem?

Many
students
share that it is hard for them to stay focused at
school
.
Moreover
, the lack of focus in
school
can be attributed to various factors, including the rapid development of technology. In
this
essay, I am going to give some reasons and find solutions
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this
problem. If in the past,
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often complained
students
spend
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time to gossips with their
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during the course, nowadays, pupils not only receive comments from their tutor like that but
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distract
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. Especially,
students
who are in high
school
, allow to bring a phone with them.
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can help them to the lessons more interesting with activities created by
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with other notifications of
this
convenient technology.
Moreover
, the less
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concentration in
class
starts from the culture.
For instance
, in VietNam, most parents are fond of having an extra
class
for their children. In these courses, some teachers taught pupils the new lesson before going to
school
to help their performance look better in
class
.
Therefore
, these
students
do not feel interested in the subject at
school
anymore and do other activities during the lessons. Because of those reasons, schools need to take action
such
as open
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to train the teachers about the lesson that they should teach in extra
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.
Instead
of teaching new knowledge before going to
school
, they can upgrade the lesson more intensive.
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,
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also
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a meeting with
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parents to share the role of
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class
.
Last
but not least,
students
should know the
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of studying at
schools
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and be taught tips to stay focused.
To sum up
, with the growth of the convenient life,
students
have much fun which can reduce their concentration in
class
.
Moreover
, an ineffective method can affect
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their behaviours if they do not have
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Besides
, government and schools raise
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awareness, they
also
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for teachers, parents and
students
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • concentration
  • attention span
  • distractions
  • technology
  • boredom
  • tiredness
  • engagement
  • learning disabilities
  • teaching techniques
  • classroom size
  • family issues
  • health problems
  • motivational strategies
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