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Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school. What are the reasons? What could be done to solve this problem?

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Many
students
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 share that it is hard for them to stay focused at
school
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.
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, the lack of focus in
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 can be attributed to various factors, including the rapid development of technology. In
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 problem. If in the past,
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 often complained
students
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 spend
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time to gossips with their
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 during the course, nowadays, pupils not only receive comments from their tutor like that but
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distract
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 by
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phone
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. Especially,
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 who are in high
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, allow to bring a phone with them.
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 in some cases,
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phone
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 can help them to the lessons more interesting with activities created by
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, it properly
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create
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lack
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 of
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 with other notifications of
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 convenient technology.
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, the less
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concentration in
class
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 starts from the culture.
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, in VietNam, most parents are fond of having an extra
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 for their children. In these courses, some teachers taught pupils the new lesson before going to
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 to help their performance look better in
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.
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, these
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 do not feel interested in the subject at
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 anymore and do other activities during the lessons. Because of those reasons, schools need to take action
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 to train the teachers about the lesson that they should teach in extra
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 of teaching new knowledge before going to
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, they can upgrade the lesson more intensive.
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,
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also
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need
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 a meeting with
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the student’s
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 parents to share the role of
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class
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 but not least,
students
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 should know the
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 of studying at
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 and be taught tips to stay focused.
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, with the growth of the convenient life,
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 have much fun which can reduce their concentration in
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, an ineffective method can affect
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their behaviours if they do not have
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 right direction soon.
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, government and schools raise
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awareness, they
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 need to take action to open
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 for teachers, parents and
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 to try
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 new way.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • concentration
  • attention span
  • distractions
  • technology
  • boredom
  • tiredness
  • engagement
  • learning disabilities
  • teaching techniques
  • classroom size
  • family issues
  • health problems
  • motivational strategies
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