The maps below show the layouts of nature Museum between 2010 and 2013.
The two maps given illustrate the before and after of a nature
museum
which proposed redevelopment throughout the period from 2010 to 2013.
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Overall
the Linking Words
museum
experienced noticeable changes in 3 years, Use synonyms
additionally
, the most significant one is that the Linking Words
museum
had been expanded and the garden Use synonyms
area
was removed, Use synonyms
while
the centre of the Linking Words
museum
had remained unchanged almost.
The garden Use synonyms
area
with some trees was removed completely and Use synonyms
instead
of the garden Linking Words
area
, a mammals exhibit, a human origins display, a shop and a cafe were installed. Use synonyms
Also
, on the west side of the Linking Words
museum
, the Use synonyms
mammals'
exhibit was replaced by an ice age and insects sector.
The centre of the Change noun form
mammals
museum
which includes an ocean hall, a lobby, a ticket desk and the entrance,Use synonyms
also
the dinosaurs Linking Words
area
remained just like before, Use synonyms
in addition
to Linking Words
this
, the ocean hall just had been expanded a little which was not as noticeable as other sectors.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words museum, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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