The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
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The graph above that indicates how Australian teenagers' behaviour towards eating fast food has changed over time,
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, in the 90s Fish and chips were the most popular among teens yet as time passed they became the least popular, from 100 to nearly 39 times.
On the other hand
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, the interesting thing is, Hamburgers stole first place from Fish and Chips. Not only have they improved but
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, have become the favourite fast food in 2000. In 1975 it was getting eaten only ten times per year ,
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when it comes to 2000, numbers have gotten a lot better by 100 times per year. It is fascinating that,
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Pizza was the least favourite fast food among teens, in Australia back
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, you can see it was able to get the second spot in 2000, from 8 to 85 number.
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, by looking at the chart, we can easily say Australian teenagers, for sure love Humburgers, and when it comes to choosing between Fish and Chips and Pizza, they definitely choose Pizza! No doubt!
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumption
  • Trend
  • Hamburgers
  • Pizza
  • Fried chicken
  • Period
  • Health awareness
  • Availability
  • Taste preferences
  • Marketing influence
  • Implications
  • Western culture
  • Peak periods
  • Promotions
  • Societal habits
  • Patterns
  • Popular
  • Declined
  • Introduction
  • Eating habits
  • Summarise
  • Prediction
  • Recommendations
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