IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 4.5

mo? re and more people prefer to read ebooks rather than paper books nowdays. what are he reasons for this ?what problems this can cause for libraries?

#mo #re #people #ebooks #paper #books #nowdays #libraries
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Due to
Linking Words
 the technological advancements in
modern
Add an article
the modern
show examples
 era, people's preferences for reading
books
Use synonyms
has
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
show examples
 changed, so electronic
books
Use synonyms
 are more
favorable
Change the spelling
favourable
show examples
 than paper
books
Use synonyms
 these days. In
this
Linking Words
 essay, I will write about the reasons behind
this
Linking Words
 phenomenon and the
harms
Fix the agreement mistake
harm
show examples
 that it can cause to
libraries
Use synonyms
. E-
books
Use synonyms
 are the updated versions of paper
books
Use synonyms
 now, they are available through smart gadgets everywhere and
everytime
Replace the word
every time
show examples
 one
demands
Correct pronoun usage
themdemands
show examples
. Publishing
books
Use synonyms
 in electronic
Use synonyms
version
Fix the agreement mistake
versions
show examples
 has numerous
adavantages
Correct your spelling
advantages
,
for instance
Linking Words
, saving natural resources, conservation of the earth's environment, cheaper price, easier accessibility and so many more are some of the advantages that pursue individuals
to
Fix the infinitive
apply
show examples
choose
electronic
Add an article
the electronic
an electronic
show examples
Use synonyms
version
Fix the agreement mistake
versions
show examples
 of
books
Use synonyms
.
Also
Linking Words
, considering the widespread usage of gadgets and tools like laptops, smartphones or tablets it is easier for consumers to provide
electronic
Add an article
an electronic
show examples
version
Use synonyms
 of their
favorite
Change the spelling
favourite
show examples
 book and have it on their personal
device
Fix the agreement mistake
devices
show examples
.
However
Linking Words
, despite
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
all the benefits that e-
books
Use synonyms
 offer, they can be the cause of some problems for
libraries
Use synonyms
 since providing electronic
Use synonyms
version
Fix the agreement mistake
versions
show examples
 of all the
books
Use synonyms
 in
libraries
Use synonyms
 demands special tools and facilities and
also
Linking Words
 the job opportunities available in the
libraries
Use synonyms
 may be eliminated.
In addition
Linking Words
, providing
electronic
Add an article
an electronic
show examples
Use synonyms
version
Fix the agreement mistake
versions
show examples
 of paper
books
Use synonyms
 can be opposed to
copyright
Add an article
the copyright
show examples
 of some
books
Use synonyms
 and creates obstacles in the way of
consumers
Change noun form
consumers'
consumer's
show examples
 accessibility.
to conclude
Linking Words
, I think nowadays,
although
Linking Words
 the publication of e-
books
Use synonyms
 can pursue more people to read
books
Use synonyms
 and facilitates
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
accessibility to them, it can lead to the formation of some drawbacks and obstacles for
libraries
Use synonyms
 to provide
electronic
Add an article
an electronic
show examples
version
Use synonyms
 of all the available
books
Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
on
show examples
 their shelves.
Submitted by eemami14 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: