Your class has attended a panel discussion on how to influence people to be more environmentally friendly. You have made the notes below: Ideas for influencing people to be more environmentally friendly: laws and taxes •education media Sorne opinions expressed in the discussion:
Nowadays we are much more aware and alert about the planet’s health,
nevertheless
climate change is an increasingly worrying subject that has only grown over the years. In Add a comma
nevertheless,
this
essay
I will discuss two possible Add a comma
essay,
options
that can influence people
to be more environmentally friendly. Firstly
, the government should implement taxes that punish hazardous actions towards the planet, like polluting and littering, as well as
not recycling properly. This
way people
will think twice before doing so, and the money paid can work as funding for counteractive forces. In addition
, laws should be implemented, these are necessary for setting a new rulebook regarding the fight against climate change. Because, at the end
of the day, how can we expect people
to be caring about the planet if there aren’t any official norms?.
Change the punctuation
?
Moreover
, the government could, for example
, motivate people
to use alternative options
to polluting vehicles by providing funding to
benign Change preposition
for
options
. Secondly
, environmental awareness should be implemented from an early age. If children have good role models they will grow up to be ones themselves, therefore
, parents and teachers are responsible for the kid's learning and morals. For instance
, school’s
should impart classes and talks dedicated fully to understanding these issues, like engaging courses that motivate children to recycle, buy responsibly, use public transport, etc. In conclusion, even though I believe both of these Change noun form
schools
options
to be an incentive to engage people
environmentally, I think governmental actions hold the key to this
pressing issue.Submitted by santos_dij on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion