Two weeks ago you bought a radio from a local branch of a well-known chain of shops. It did not work properly. The shop took it back and said they would repair it. You have waited a week and it is still not ready. Write a letter to the shop. In your letter say what has happened and how you feel ask them to explain why there has been a delay ask them to repair the radio very quickly or to supply you with a new radio
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to let you know that your shop has taken more than a week to return my radio
which was given for fixing the antenna issue.
Two weeks ago I purchased this
brand new radio
from your karama
branch. In just two days after my purchase, I noticed a slight dysfunction Change the capitalization
Karama
karma
while
changing radio
channels. The issue got aggravated as the days passed. Then
I took it to your branch and your service executive confirmed that the radio
has an antenna issue that needs to be fixed. It is very disappointing to know that your shop has sold me a faulty equipment
.
On top of Remove the article
faulty equipment
a piece of faulty equipment
this
problem, I am also
experiencing a
bad customer service from your repair team. They confirmed Correct article usage
apply
me
that the Change preposition
to me
radio
will
be fixed and returned in two days. It has been more than a weekWrong verb form
would
I
did not receive any feedback. I need an explanation Correct word choice
since I
on
Change preposition
of
this
delay from your end.
I need my radio
to be returned today or replace it with a new radio
.
Yours faithfully,Submitted by msrinivas7866 on
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