The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
The graph above shows the change in fast
food
consumption by Australian teenagers between the years 1975 and 2000. The graph focuses on three particular types of fast foods: Use synonyms
pizza
, Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
and Use synonyms
hamburgers
.
From the chart, in 1975 the most popular snacks among Australian teens were Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
, which were eaten almost 100 Use synonyms
times
per Use synonyms
year
. Use synonyms
However
, its popularity considerably declined over the years, but for a brief revival in 1985. In 2000, Linking Words
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
are only eaten slightly less than 40 Use synonyms
times
per Use synonyms
year
.
Use synonyms
Fish
and Use synonyms
chips
were substituted by other types of processed foods, Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
pizza
and Use synonyms
hamburgers
. Use synonyms
Whereas
these foods were not the favourite choice back in 1975, their popularity steadily increased as time passed. Looking at the survey, in 2000 Linking Words
pizza
on average is eaten 85 Use synonyms
times
per Use synonyms
year
, and Use synonyms
hamburgers
slightly more than 100 Use synonyms
times
per Use synonyms
year
. As a conclusion, Australian teenagers' first pick in fast Use synonyms
food
changed from Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
in 1975 to Use synonyms
hamburgers
in 2000.
Focusing on the consumption of Use synonyms
pizza
, in 2000 it takes the silver medal of most consummated processed Use synonyms
food
, Use synonyms
whereas
back in 1975 it was the Linking Words
last
picked fast Linking Words
food
and was only eaten approximately 10 Use synonyms
times
per Use synonyms
year
.Use synonyms
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