The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
The graph above shows the change in fast
food
consumption by Australian teenagers between the years 1975 and 2000. The graph focuses on three particular types of fast foods:
pizza
,
fish
and
chips
and
hamburgers
. From the chart, in 1975 the most popular snacks among Australian teens were
fish
and
chips
, which were eaten almost 100
times
per
year
.
However
, its popularity considerably declined over the years, but for a brief revival in 1985. In 2000,
fish
and
chips
are only eaten slightly less than 40
times
per
year
.
Fish
and
chips
were substituted by other types of processed foods,
such
as
pizza
and
hamburgers
.
Whereas
these foods were not the favourite choice back in 1975, their popularity steadily increased as time passed. Looking at the survey, in 2000
pizza
on average is eaten 85
times
per
year
, and
hamburgers
slightly more than 100
times
per
year
. As a conclusion, Australian teenagers' first pick in fast
food
changed from
fish
and
chips
in 1975 to
hamburgers
in 2000. Focusing on the consumption of
pizza
, in 2000 it takes the silver medal of most consummated processed
food
,
whereas
back in 1975 it was the
last
picked fast
food
and was only eaten approximately 10
times
per
year
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, pizza, fish, chips, hamburgers, times, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumption
  • Trend
  • Hamburgers
  • Pizza
  • Fried chicken
  • Period
  • Health awareness
  • Availability
  • Taste preferences
  • Marketing influence
  • Implications
  • Western culture
  • Peak periods
  • Promotions
  • Societal habits
  • Patterns
  • Popular
  • Declined
  • Introduction
  • Eating habits
  • Summarise
  • Prediction
  • Recommendations
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