The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
The graph above shows the change in fast
food
consumption by Australian teenagers between the years 1975 and 2000. The graph focuses on three particular types of fast foods: pizza
, fish
and chips
and hamburgers
.
From the chart, in 1975 the most popular snacks among Australian teens were fish
and chips
, which were eaten almost 100 times
per year
. However
, its popularity considerably declined over the years, but for a brief revival in 1985. In 2000, fish
and chips
are only eaten slightly less than 40 times
per year
.
Fish
and chips
were substituted by other types of processed foods, such
as pizza
and hamburgers
. Whereas
these foods were not the favourite choice back in 1975, their popularity steadily increased as time passed. Looking at the survey, in 2000 pizza
on average is eaten 85 times
per year
, and hamburgers
slightly more than 100 times
per year
. As a conclusion, Australian teenagers' first pick in fast food
changed from fish
and chips
in 1975 to hamburgers
in 2000.
Focusing on the consumption of pizza
, in 2000 it takes the silver medal of most consummated processed food
, whereas
back in 1975 it was the last
picked fast food
and was only eaten approximately 10 times
per year
.Submitted by elisabetta.temporin on
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