Your public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter, describe what you like about the library, say what you don't like and make suggestions for improvements.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I’m writing
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letter in response to the suggestion request concerning the library’s services and facilities. The staff is incredibly knowledgeable regarding the titles the library offers and how we can borrow them. The reading recommendations I have received were so accurate I could not stop reading them.
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, I love the fact that children are welcome and given the opportunity to fall in love with books and reading
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an early age.
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, I believe our community deserves a renovated space. Some rooms are dark and do not offer the
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we usually look for in a library.
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summer days, it is hard to stay inside, as it is
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the lack of air conditioning. I believe some infrastructure improvements would make an enormous difference. I would suggest having larger windows so the rooms could be filled with natural light. I
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think it is a great idea to install central air conditioning, so all visitors and staff would feel comfortable regardless of the weather outside. Yours faithfully, Jack Morris.
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