The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where reevant.
The given maps illustrate the development of
road
accesses
to a Fix the agreement mistake
access
city
hospital between 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that several accesses to the hospital were built in 2010, and some amenities were also
constructed.
Looking at the information in more detail, there was
no changes in Ring Change the verb form
were
Road
which was still located in
the north side of the Change preposition
on
city
hospital. Two roundabouts was
constructed, which were first to connect Change the verb form
were
hospital
Correct article usage
the hospital
road
and city
hospital and Correct article usage
the city
second,
it connected between city
road
and hospital
Correct article usage
the hospital
road
.
Initially
, there was only car
park in 2007 that was parking for staff and Correct article usage
a car
public
. In 2010, the parking area was divided into two places where Correct article usage
the public
staff
car park remained in the same place, and Correct article usage
the staff
public
car park was built Correct article usage
a public
in
the east side of the hospital. Change preposition
on
Initially
, bus
Correct article usage
the bus
stop
Fix the agreement mistake
stops
located
Add a missing verb
was located
in
each Change preposition
on
sides
of Change to a singular noun
side
hospital
Correct article usage
the hospital
road
. Then
, three years later, bus
station Correct article usage
a bus
was exist
Change the verb form
existed
in
the west side of Change preposition
on
hospital
Correct article usage
the hospital
road
. This
station connected
Add a missing verb
is connected
with
two Change preposition
by
roundabots
.Correct your spelling
roundabouts
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "initially".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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