The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts give information about the purchasing and drinking of 2 kinds of drinks in different areas of Australia.
Overall
,
Hobart
rank
first
in the category of went to a café and the
Brisbane
stands
last
in the group of bought fresh
coffee
. The
first
group which is bought fresh
coffee
in the
last
4 weeks stands
first
in
Hobart
and forms just under 65%.
Moreover
, Melbourne and Sydney contribute just over 60% and approximately three-fifths respectively.
In contrast
to
Brisbane
, Adelaide is lower by 5%. The second group called bought instant
coffee
in the
last
44 weeks, stands
first
in
Hobart
and it is around 55%.
Moreover
, Adelaide is approximately 3% lower than
Brisbane
,
however
; Melbourne is slightly higher than Sydney. The
last
category is,
went
Wrong verb form
going
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to a café for
coffee
or tea in the
last
4 weeks.
Brisbane
and Adelaide rank
last
in the same level which is under 35%. Sydney is almost as higher Melbourne, the former accounts for under 45% and the latter contributes over 40% and the remaining just under 40% is allocated to
Hobart
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, moreover".
Vocabulary: Replace the words hobart, first, brisbane, coffee with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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