Some people feel that animals should have the same rights as humans but other think they are not as equal or intelligent as us so should not have the same rights. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.

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It is generally argued, that

animals

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and

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both ought to be respected

similarly

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the mental level of

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is low than

humans

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, they are

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creatures on

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earth whose care should be our concern.

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essay will discuss both views of the topic with the help of examples and in the end, will give a valid conclusion. To commence with, the majority of people take concerned about

animals

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because,

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' and

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' basic needs

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as food, shelter and love are the same. If

animals

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will get these primary needs, they will respect and cause no danger to human beings in response.

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, in some countries, there are animal houses where they are treated with love and affection,

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, the population get many benefits out of them.

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this

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, trained

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are very loyal, wise and intelligent. Instructed

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' performance is far better.

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, many families who are dog lovers keep

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as pets and train them. These

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take care of their trainer and his whole family.

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, some individuals' point of view about

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is different.

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, people consider keeping pets or giving time and respect to them is a waste of time because after great care if

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are hungry, they invariably attack their owners. To illustrate

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, one of my friend's cats attacked her daughter when the monkey find out the child's mom is absent. She was very disappointed by

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act.

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, expelled the monkey from her home. In conclusion, some people consider that

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should not be given respect because they cannot live with

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for safety purposes.

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, in my opinion, all

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are very innocent and they never harm

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until and unless they feel any kind of danger. The government should pay heed to

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issue and must establish animal houses where they can fulfil animal demands.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

317 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Ethical treatment
Cognitive functions
Hierarchy of rights
Ecosystems
Legislation
Species-specific
Sentience
Consciousness
Compassion
Cruelty

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Some people feel that animals should have the same rights as humans but other think they are not as equal or intelligent as us so should not have the same rights. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.

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