The table illustrates the financial funds that America, European and other countries allocated to developing ones from 2006 to 2010.

The table illustrates the financial funds that America, European and other countries allocated to developing ones from 2006 to 2010.
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, European and other countries allocated to developing ones from 2006 to 2010.
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, in 1995 in ,Africa it was less than 6000 and other to rest of the countries.
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, in 2000 in,Europe it was nearly 6000 and in other rear nations.
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, in 2005 in Latin
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Caribbean it was nearly 6000 and great to nations. In 2010 North
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between 5000 and 7000 up to 38000 to other nations. In 2011 Oceania was more than 6000 upto 35000. In 2012 in ,Asia it was more than 6000
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37000. In 2013 Africa was nearly 5500. In 2014 it was around 6000 and up to 36000. In 2015 Occenina is nearly 6000 and up to 38000. In 2016 Latin
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and the Caribbean were between 6000-7000.
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, the highest was in 2015 and the lowest was in 1995. More Employment in million was to Asia. The above data
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in the table.
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