Write a letter to a bookstore manager who is living in another city. Ask him/ her to make available a book that you are interested in. In you letter. - What book you are looking for? - Why you need this book. - How you plan to purchase the book.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope
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letter finds you well. My name is Jacob and I am
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writing
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letter to let you know about the books that I urgently need. The book with the publication name is 'Medical Home Insomnia' which
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by Timothy. I already search
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countless
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bookstore
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in Medan.
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have the books I am looking for.
Last
night, I was surfing on
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and found out about your bookstore has it. Since my mother has insomnia in early 2023, I already try
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method to help reduce her insomnia. Until I found an article which is
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popular by Timothy, I would like to
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the books as
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soon
as possible. I would like
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your bookstore which live in another city on
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. I would
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gratefull
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if you would keep 1 for me. Yours sincerely, Jacob
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • edition
  • publication year
  • out of stock
  • academic purposes
  • personal interest
  • work-related reasons
  • unavailable
  • shipping costs
  • reserve
  • in-person pick-up
  • online payment
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