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in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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In the countries around the world,
accomodation
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accommodation
 in your own home or in a rental one differs in levels of priority.
People
's point of view towards
such
 matters is not the same
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 on many factors so, in
this
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 I will write about the reasons behind
this
 subject and whether it is advantageous or disadvantageous.
People
 in different regions have different opinions and approaches towards the
ownership
 of things like
car
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cars
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 or
house
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houses
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. I believe the utmost vital reason for
such
approach
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 lies in the
economical
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 circumstances of each society that affects its members' behaviour towards
this
 kind of phenomenon. In fact, the function of
economy
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the economy
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 and
politic
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 system in every society plays a key role in how individuals act about related matters. The other pivotal element is the culture of different societies because in some cultures
ownership
 of the
house
 or the car is a vivid description of individuals' social class,
as a result
, in
such
cultures
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people
 save their money and try to own properties rather than rent them. Is it a good thing to own a
house
 or not? As far as I know, it is not a negative thing, in fact, the
ownership
 of properties can provide the owner the feeling of stability and independence.
In addition
, it is an ensured way of money saving that helps
people
 to spend their budget in the most beneficial and logical way. Even more, owning a
house
 or any other kind of
properties
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property
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 can be a great investment that helps the owner in case of difficulty.
to sum up
, I think there are reasons
such
 as economy,
politic
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politics
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 and culture that are involved in individuals' approach towards property
ownership
 and it is an advantageous investiture for the owner that can be helpful in different aspects.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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