The bar chart gives information about the number of social network users in the US from 2008 to 2014.
The given bar chart shows the data on the percentage of
people
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people's
usage
of multiple social networking Use synonyms
sites
in the United States during 2014 and 2015.
In 2014, most of the American citizens used one site reaching the highest Use synonyms
usage
over the 2 years period by 36%. In the second spot, 23% of people used two Use synonyms
sites
and Use synonyms
also
with a minimal difference, 22% Linking Words
usage
of no Use synonyms
sites
was recorded. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
usage
percentage for three, four and five networking Use synonyms
sites
were the lowest Use synonyms
by
respectively recorded, 12%, 5% and 2%.
Following 2014, in 2015, in comparison to the Change preposition
apply
last
Linking Words
year
records, the Change noun form
year's
usage
of one site dropped to 28% but Use synonyms
remaind
at the first spot for the second year. Correct your spelling
remained
remain
Although
Linking Words
,
the Remove the comma
apply
usage
of no Use synonyms
sites
experienced the same trend Use synonyms
by
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of
1
% fall, the percentage of two social networking Correct article usage
a 1
sites
increased to 24%. The three Use synonyms
remained
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remaining
catagories
kept the rising trend compared to their records of 2014.
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categories
Overall
, the compared Linking Words
catagories
experienced approximatelyCorrect your spelling
categories
8
% of Correct article usage
an 8
difference
and Add an article
the difference
although
some Linking Words
catagories
had a falling trend, most of them recorded a minimal rise.Correct your spelling
categories
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