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Anybody can use a mobile phone to answer the work and personal calls at any time or 7 days a week. Does this development have more positive or negative effects on both individuals and society?

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Thanks to the popularity of a mobile phone,
people
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 use
this
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 device to communicate at
work
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 at any
time
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. From my view, I assert that
this
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 trend
is has
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 more negative effects than positive ones effects. On the one hand, the utilization of digital devices for exchanging information has some benefits for individuals and society
work
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 and study.
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, communication through
phones
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 will rise the productivity of
work
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.
This
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people
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need
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 not
to
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travel to meet in person so it will save much
time
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 and they have more
time
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 to complete other deadlines.
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, talking by
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 method can
also
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 expand the connection in the global world.
For instance
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, relatives living in foreign countries could talk to their family by making video calls, so they feel less missed
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 their family.
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,
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 measurement has some drawbacks.
On the other hand
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, I believe that there are more disadvantages when
people
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 use
phones
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 to interact with each other at
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.
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skills
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 of communication of
people
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 will be declined since they rely too much on talking on
phones
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 and do not go out to meet face to face.
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, for a long
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,
people
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 have high childhood of being shy and afraid of communicating.
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,
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 habit of waiting
calls
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for calls
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also
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 decreases
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attention. The reason is that when
people
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work
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 but nearby
phones
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 will send notifications and show calls and in order to be rude they will answer.
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, after many
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time
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anwering
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answering
 calls, they will get distracted and hard to concentrate. =>
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, the frequent notifications of personal calls can interrupt
people
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’s
work
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time
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. When a person frequently checks messages or answers from personal relationships, he or she tends to be distracted and find it hard to concentrate at
work
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.
As a result
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,
this
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 can lead to reduced productivity at
work
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.  In conclusion, it is true that with the development of technology, exchanging
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information
enhance
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enhances
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 the pace of
work
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 and
give
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 more access to anywhere in the world, but I still believe more drawbacks than disadvantages.
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