Historical objects should be brought back to their country of origin. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is asserted that the ancient items should be given back to the nations
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these belong to.I strongly accord with
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consideration and will discuss the rationales to prove
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in upcoming paragraphs. No doubt,if the historical objects would be placed within other countries,the foreigners can get to know about the rich culture
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the history of other Nations.
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,these things should be returned to
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country to provide knowledge to local ones, especially
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children about
the living style of their ancestors.
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,ancient 'swords' can give information pertaining to how the ancient people
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fought
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,they can be fruitful to teach locals.
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,the economy of
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can be improved provided that antiques would be returned to the concerned region.
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, the original owner country can exhibit the historical items in their museums which will eventually increase the GDP of the nation as
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foreigners will visit these places
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purchasing tickets.
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, 'Kohinoor' which costs
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of dollars is in London,but it belongs to India.
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,it has declined India's economic power.
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,the statues of gods
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as 'Lord
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' can be placed in
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country's temples and the
privilegers
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privileged
can pay
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obedience
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to these.
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,they can see how their gods and goddesses used to look
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their deeds. In conclusion,
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antiques placed in other regions' museums can provide knowledge to
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foreigners about the rich heritage of other nations,I believe that these should be returned back in order to increase
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economic growth
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providing information to locals about their ancestors.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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