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you recently received an invitation to a three day training programe which should be benefit you and the company write a letter to you manager and say:- ask to attend the program decribe the program explain how the program will benefit the company write at least 150 words invitation day program taining manager attend program details and benefits

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Dear Mr.
john
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John
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 Hope you are having a great day. Gratefully, I would like to present to you an idea
that is
 extremely useful for the company in general and for me privately,Actually,
Last
 week I received an invitation to a marketing training program for 3 days,obviously it's useful for both of us, despite its importance to our work path,
moreover
 very necessary for my career now and for the future. Mainly, the program
is discussing
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discusses
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 important points in the marketing field,
for example
: 1- search engine optimization. 2- google advertisment. 3- moderate social media campaigns. 4- reaching a new targeted niche.
Due to
 our profits
this
 year, and the plan to raise the profit rate for the next year,clearly, these topics are what we need at our company Kindly, accept my request to attend the training program,
although
 you can attend it too, so we can get the maximum benefits for both of us. Eagerly, I am looking forward to your response ASAP. Best regards, Yours sincerely,
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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