You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. State what your skills and experience are. Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.

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Dear Ms Pasquale, I am writing to show my interest in the non-paid job which you posted

last

week in the newspaper.

However

, as I know there are different departments but I would like to work in a cultural exhibition where people from all over Canada will come to show their talents. I am very fond of collecting paintings and pictures.

Moreover

, I would like to work for a year. My working schedule will be on weekends from 6:00 am to 12:00 pm. The reason behind

this

is to get knowledge about local culture and

also

to interact with non-native speakers.

This

will enhance my communication skill

as well as

I can create contacts too.

Furthermore

, if you are wondering about my

skills

and experience. I do have relevant

skills

such

as effective interpersonal

skills

, communication

skills

, and teamwork which I gained after working in a restaurant. Hopefully, will receive a positive response from you. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Kanchan Bhatia

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