The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar chart gives information about how many
people
purchase and drink
coffee
and tea in
five
different regions in Australia namely Sydney, Melbourne,
Brisbane
,
Adelaide
, and Hobart.
Overall
, it is clear to see that in the
last
4 weeks,
people
went
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to
cafe
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a cafe
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for
coffee
and tea are the highest but in
Adelaide
. The number of
people
who bought fresh
coffee
is the lowest in these
five
places. To probe deeply, these
five
cities had roughly half of
residents
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the residents
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purchasing instant
coffee
, and the figures in Hobart and
Brisbane
were almost 55
percent
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. In comparison, the proportion of
people
who bought fresh
coffee
was never as high as 45
percent
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in any of the
five
cities, with those in
Brisbane
and
Adelaide
, both at nearly 35
percent
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, less likely than those in the other three cities to do so. Most inhabitants in Melbourne, Sydney, Hobart, and
Brisbane
visited a cafe for
coffee
or tea, at approximately 64, 62, 61, and 56
percent
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respectively,
whereas
just under half of residents in
Adelaide
did so.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee and tea buying habits
  • instant coffee
  • fresh coffee
  • cafe culture
  • social influences
  • economic factors
  • city demographics
  • seasonal trends
  • marketing strategies
  • consumer preferences
  • availability
  • popularity
  • consumption patterns
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