You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you are selling • describe the furniture • suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture

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Dear Sofia, As you know, I am moving to my new house next month. There is so my stuff at my previous house

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as appliances, Electronic items, and kitchen stuff. It is very hard for me to carry all the things with me in the house. So, I decided to sell my equipment. I have eight seated sofa sets and 1 single bed, the condition of the appliance is very good. I thought you need

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so I noticed you if you wanna buy

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thing at a convenient price you can come and check the condition and decide what you wanna do.I know you've always liked

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appliance so I could let you have it at a good price. I'd rather sell it to you than to a stranger! I am leaving from here on 30 July before

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date you can come at any time but the important thing is to ring me on my phone before reaching. I am looking forward to hearing from Warm Wishes, Cecilia

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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7 paragraphs

171 words

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