The number of plants and animals is declining. Describe some reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.

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One of the most serious issues facing the world is the number of
plants
and animals is reducing. The main reason for
this
is that there
more
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population than before over the past few years that need accommodations and a viable option is to introduce many huge reserved
forest
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for animals and
plants
to live in. The number of people buying houses increases year by year, with most
household
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at least
consists
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of 3 people, there would be a need
of
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2.7 billion houses for 8 billion populations which takes up a large sum of
forest
land that
are shelters
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to flora and fauna.
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, a property company is able to own multiple pieces of
forests
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forest
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land to build factories, houses, and even commercial buildings just for the purpose of profit and satisfying investors. A solution
that is
proving successful is to mark the
forests
as
a
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reserved
forest
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forests
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to prevent the purchase of the land or development in that area. These
forests
will be able to preserve the wild lives and
plants
protecting them from
humans
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greed, which in return
reduce
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extinction
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of a species.
For instance
, Malaysia National Park is one of the reserved
forest
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forests
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in the world which is protected by law
with
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any violators being prosecuted. The Malaysian National Park gives access to hikers to hike and camp in the
forest
overnight to enjoy
the
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nature
while
abiding
to
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the rules stated by the government.
To conclude
, the dropping numbers
on
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plants
and animals is
due to
overpopulation which causes the demand for accommodations and factories to
sky rocket
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can be prevented by marking more
forests
as
a
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reserved
forest
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and allowing humans to experience the beauty of nature by entering the
forest
. I would definitely love to visit some of the reserved
forest
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in the world one day.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • ecosystem
  • endangered species
  • conservation
  • sustainability
  • preservation
  • reforestation
  • ecological balance
  • habitat destruction
  • poaching
  • renewable resources
  • wildlife sanctuaries
  • environmental degradation
  • climate resilience
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