It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
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facing
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be facing
life
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playing
safe
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the safe
a safe
zone
. Although
the disadvantages might huge depends on how big the risk people
take, I agree that people
should be brave and face some challenges in their life
.
On the one hand, choosing a risky decision will unlock new problems, especially in proffesional
lives and personal lives. Correct your spelling
professional
In addition
, not every people
is comfortable with the presure
it will give, and it might trigger an individual’s anxiety. Correct your spelling
pressure
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a professional
people
will choose the more stable career ladders. Same like
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an entrepreneur
the entrepreneur
likely
to play safe by selling very general products. Even though there are many motivators who encourage them to take risks in order to level up, they feel comfortable and unwilling to try other paths. Add a missing verb
is likely
Consequently
, if this
way of thinking become
a culture, it will kill creativity and Change the verb form
becomes
ability
to reach something big in Correct article usage
the ability
this
life
.
On the other hand
, either big
leap in career or personal Correct article usage
a big
life
, is come from risky
decision. In fact, individuals who Correct article usage
a risky
success
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succeed
life
would not settle for less and try to reach more than bare
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society's
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standards
for instance
, is a scary thing for youngster
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youngsters
however
they should take a big leap to reach that kind of happiness. They ought to try beyond their comfort Add a comma
,however
zone
due to
achieving something big. Therefore
, workers suppose to be brave and do something out of the box as it could unlock bigger opportunities not only in private live
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apply
also
in professional setting
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settings
in
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of
comfortable
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the comfortable
zone
will develop their sense, which can thus
widen their possibility to predict the right moment when they have to stay in the zone
or not.
In conclusion, while
decide
something which has Change the verb form
deciding
big
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a big
people
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people's
also
to be successful in this
life
. I remain firmly convinved
that the negative output could be tackled by managing risks.Correct your spelling
convinced
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