Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned while others believe that people should be free to choose .discuss bothe these views and give your own opinion

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the workplace will be changed a lot in the nearest future because of many amount of reasons. First of all,
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AI is going to replace some professions
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, thanks to technologies manage
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