(The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 (million).

(The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 (million).
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The table gives in for information regarding the
number
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of people from different regions around the world who travelled internationally between 1990 and 2005.
It is clear that
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the total
number
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of people that travelled internationally increased significantly over the period.
Also
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,Europe accounted for the largest
number
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of international
travellers
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in all years. In 1990,over 280,2
million
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European travel internationally,
while
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80,5
million
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Americans and 60,2
million
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people from the Asia
pacific
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Pacific
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region
also
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travelled abroad.18,2
million
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Africa travelled internationally in that year,
while
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the figure for the Middle East was only around half of that,at 9,8
million
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. Over the following fifteen years,the
number
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of European
travellers
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continued to rise,peaking at 400,2
million
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in 2005.The
number
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of international
travellers
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from Asia Pacific grew quickly,rising from 80,3
million
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in 1995 to over 135
million
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in 2005.Meanwhile,the
number
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of American
travellers
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peaked at 118,2
million
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in 2000,before dropping to 113,2
million
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in 2005.The figure for the remaining regions
also
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increased over the period, with African
travellers
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amounting to 28,7
million
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and those from the Middle East 15,8
million
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, travellers, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant increase
  • international travel
  • popular destinations
  • economic growth
  • technological advancements
  • ease of travel
  • cultural exchange
  • globalization
  • fluctuations
  • trend
  • millions of travelers
  • annual growth rate
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