(The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 (million).

(The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 (million).
The table gives in for information regarding the
number
of people from different regions around the world who travelled internationally between 1990 and 2005.
It is clear that
the total
number
of people that travelled internationally increased significantly over the period.
Also
,Europe accounted for the largest
number
of international
travellers
in all years. In 1990,over 280,2
million
European travel internationally,
while
80,5
million
Americans and 60,2
million
people from the Asia
pacific
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Pacific
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region
also
travelled abroad.18,2
million
Africa travelled internationally in that year,
while
the figure for the Middle East was only around half of that,at 9,8
million
. Over the following fifteen years,the
number
of European
travellers
continued to rise,peaking at 400,2
million
in 2005.The
number
of international
travellers
from Asia Pacific grew quickly,rising from 80,3
million
in 1995 to over 135
million
in 2005.Meanwhile,the
number
of American
travellers
peaked at 118,2
million
in 2000,before dropping to 113,2
million
in 2005.The figure for the remaining regions
also
increased over the period, with African
travellers
amounting to 28,7
million
and those from the Middle East 15,8
million
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  • significant increase
  • international travel
  • popular destinations
  • economic growth
  • technological advancements
  • ease of travel
  • cultural exchange
  • globalization
  • fluctuations
  • trend
  • millions of travelers
  • annual growth rate
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