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The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
two
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 charts provided details about
science
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 qualifications held by the community in the
two
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 societies. About 60% of nations in
Singapore
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 and
Malaysia
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 do not have an information intensity.
Besides
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, people in
Malaysia
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 who held
science
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 qualifications with school-leaving exams were more than
Singapore
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. Populations in basic education in the
two
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 countries were more than in higher education.
Furthermore
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, the
Malaysia
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 Master’s grade holders were equal to the
Singapore
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.
On the other hand
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, the biggest difference between the
two
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 countries was Bachelor’s degree holders almost double. Notably, higher education in
Malaysia
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 and
Singapore
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 is lower than 5%.
Conversely
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, Master’s degrees were the fewest group in the
two
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 countries. It can be seen that more than half of the population in both the country has no qualification in
science
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 in any academic program.
In addition
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, the percentage of people who attain a master's degree in
science
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 in both
Malaysia
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 and
Singapore
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 are absolutely the same and is the lowest rate of both the region.
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