The map illustrates how an art gallery changed from 2015 to now.
The map illustrates how an art gallery changed from 2015 to now.
Overall
, it can be seen that the interior design of the ground floor has had many changes with the replacement of Exhibition
room 4 being the most significant change.
On the one hand,to the left of the ground floor was the Exhibition
Roomroom 4, but it was demolished to make way for the construction of a new temporary exhibition
and children's play area in the lower left corner. A gallery, whose original space is now used for vending machines, has been relocated to take up the cafe space in the upper left.
On the other hand
,a central set of stairs at the top and three exhibitions on the right side of the plan remain the same, with a new elevator added next to Exhibition
3 on the left. There is an entrance hall in the middle of the floor and a receptionist in front of the stairs. While
there was no change in the entrance hall, the receptionist was moved to the side of the temporary exhibition
hall on the right.Submitted by joyce.ta213 on
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