The top priority of businesses is making money and they do not need to have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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concern, so these businesses are not

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demanded to have social responsibilities.

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perception is somewhat justifiable, I believe that if these organizations equalize between making money and social duties, it will be appreciated and meaning than only making money. On the one hand, the more developing the corporations are, the more benefits we have. One of that, they play a vital role in contributing

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economy. On condition that

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the firms generate

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more profits, they will pay

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more income tax

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local

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.

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, the

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budget will increase and they can use it to improve facilities which can substantially boost

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living quality.

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severe businesses often tend to increase human resources to work more effectively. It creates job, opportunities and

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vacancies for some who are unemployed.

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, there are a host of compelling reasons as to why I am convinced that

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corporations to do social obligation along maximizing profits. One reason is that a company's process may lead to environmental degradation.

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, some

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processes lead to air pollution or water pollution but the fee

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cleaning is extremely expensive, so most of them ignore

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process.

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reason is that enacting laws about conserving

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and doing philanthropic activities is essential for an optimistic brand image. If entrepreneurs conduct more charitable projects for the underprivileged,

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opinion of their business. In conclusion,

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it is irrefutable that maximizing revenue is the key factor

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compulsory for each corporation’s prosperity, I would contend that social accountability should

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be encouraged simultaneously.