The top priority of business is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some people argue that generating profits is
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concern, so these businesses are not
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demanded to have social responsibilities.
While
I accept that
this
perception is somewhat
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, I believe that if these organizations equalize between making money and social duties, it will be appreciated and meaning than only making money. On the one hand, the more developing the corporations are, the more benefits we have. One of that, they play a vital role in contributing
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economy. On condition that
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the firms generate
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more profits, they will pay
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more income tax
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local
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.
Therefore
, the
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government's
budget will increase and they can use it to improve facilities which can substantially boost
citizen's
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living quality.
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severe businesses often tend to increase human resources to work more effectively. It creates job, opportunities and
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vacancies for some who are unemployed.
On the other hand
, there are a host of compelling reasons as to why I am convinced that
goverments
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governments
government
should encourage
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corporations to do social obligation along maximizing profits. One reason is that a company's process may lead to environmental degradation.
For example
, some
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processes lead to air pollution or water pollution but the fee
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cleaning is extremely expensive, so most of them ignore
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process.
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reason is that enacting laws about conserving
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and doing philanthropic activities is essential for an optimistic brand image. If entrepreneurs conduct more charitable projects for the underprivileged,
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a
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opinion of their business. In conclusion,
while
it is irrefutable that maximizing revenue is the key factor
that is
compulsory for each corporation’s prosperity, I would contend that social accountability should
also
be encouraged simultaneously.
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