The top priority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

It is often said that the high priority of firms is generating profits and they feel unnecessary to take public responsibilities.

This

writer totally disagrees and will reveal the reason that the latter choice is the best option. First of all, social responsibilities had a fierce link with profit through philanthropic actions

such

as donating

money

to orphanages, the homeless, non-profit charities,

hospitals

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and hospitals

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to enhance their equipment and

also

make the life of poor people or abandoned children become better.

Moreover

, it can boost their image with the public and investors, improve fame and fortune for

companies

, and gain more opportunities to collaborate with foreign corporations. On the other side, creating job chances for unemployed people can grow businesses and expand production. Some

companies

fired lots of staff because of

redundant

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redundancy

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or they want to reduce costs of recruitment and unemployment in public is the result. Many people who lose their job can breed social tension

such

as criminals, thieves,

murderers

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and murderers

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,...and

companies

which lack staff could make recruitment to reduce the rate of crimes and society will be better.

Moreover

, corporations cannot exist and improve longer with just only profit. Focusing on making

money

and have no attention to social problems can make bad fame and their image in the public's eyes will be worse by the way. Pollution

are

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is

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bred as the result of

companies

which do not take responsibility. They can organise an environmental campaign with their profit or

invested

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invest

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money

in some activities to show the respecting

with

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for

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nature, and

also

reduce pollution from their factories which released toxic fumes and smoke

to

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into

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the environment. In conclusion,

this

writer believes that the top priority for businesses should take responsibility for the public to make life better and society will improve more and more. There's no reason for making

money

without mercy for society.