The top piority of businesses is making money, and they do not nedd to have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that corporations should only give precedence to making money and do not need to have responsibilities to the community.
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essay totally disagrees with the above opinion. First of all,
customers
would abandon brands if they found any harmful
indregents
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ingredients
or lacks of demanded qualities. Since the
industry
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revolution, mass
products
have approached
to
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customers
in
vary
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of prices, colours, and
impressing
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appearances. The
clientle
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clientele
have a wide range of choices and they are ready to spend money on the best
products
which suit their finance. What a big
mistakes
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if corporations do not have good customer
services
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to solve
customers
' concerns or
looking
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for new trends in their
favours
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.
Moreover
, as long as
companies
force their labour to work in terrific
conditons
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conditions
condition
without social benefits
such
as health
insurances
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, they will never
able
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to attract experienced workers. Even more, honourably, workforces will give up their job if they are considered
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criminals attributing to harmful
products
by the public.
On the other hand
, I
believes
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that
companies
do
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not have public responsibilities will find it hard to grow
business
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their business
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. Inexperienced labours and old technologies produce
poor quality
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products
. Bad
products
lead to reduce in
conviction
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the conviction
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of
customers
, losing contracts
to
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other reliable competitors, and
finally
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these
companies
have to face
with
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the
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bankrupt
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. What is more,
philantropic
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philanthropic
actions, for
examples
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: supporting
enviromental
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environmental
campaings
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campaigns
campaign
,
people
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and people
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suffers
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from natural disasters, are good ways to enhance the reputation of brands to the public.
Customers
definitely are keen on using these
products
as they are contributing
a
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better life. In conclusion, I
supposes
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that taking care of social responsibilities could have
companies
making more money and gain more success in their business.
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