The top piority of businesses is making money, and they do not nedd to have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that corporations should only give precedence to making money and do not need to have responsibilities to the community.
This
essay totally disagrees with the above opinion.
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customers
would abandon brands if they found any harmful Use synonyms
indregents
or lacks of demanded qualities. Since the Correct your spelling
ingredients
industry
revolution, mass Replace the word
industrial
products
have approached Use synonyms
to
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apply
customers
in Use synonyms
vary
of prices, colours, and Add an article
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a vary
impressing
appearances. The Replace the word
impressive
clientle
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clientele
products
which suit their finance. What a big Use synonyms
mistakes
if corporations do not have good customer Fix the agreement mistake
mistake
services
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service
customers
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for new trends in their Wrong verb form
look
favours
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favour
Moreover
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companies
force their labour to work in terrific Use synonyms
conditons
without social benefits Correct your spelling
conditions
condition
such
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insurances
, they will never Fix the agreement mistake
insurance
able
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be able
as
criminals attributing to harmful Change preposition
apply
products
by the public.
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On the other hand
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believes
that Change the verb form
believe
companies
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do
not have public responsibilities will find it hard to grow Correct pronoun usage
that do
business
. Inexperienced labours and old technologies produce Correct pronoun usage
their business
poor quality
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poor-quality
products
. Bad Use synonyms
products
lead to reduce in Use synonyms
conviction
of Add an article
the conviction
a conviction
customers
, losing contracts Use synonyms
to
other reliable competitors, and Change preposition
with
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finally
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companies
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with
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apply
the
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apply
bankrupt
. What is more, Replace the word
bankruptcy
philantropic
actions, for Correct your spelling
philanthropic
examples
: supporting Fix the agreement mistake
example
enviromental
Correct your spelling
environmental
campaings
, Correct your spelling
campaigns
campaign
people
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and people
suffers
from natural disasters, are good ways to enhance the reputation of brands to the public. Wrong verb form
suffering
Customers
definitely are keen on using these Use synonyms
products
as they are contributingUse synonyms
a
better life.
In conclusion, I Change preposition
to a
supposes
that taking care of social responsibilities could have Change the verb form
suppose
companies
making more money and gain more success in their business.Use synonyms
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